It is really neat that you tell us about this great holiday. I wish you would tell us what the sikhs and jains worship about on devali.I like that ypou tell us about diffrent storys of devaoli
Great slide I think you could add more Detail as there were four of you to find information. I like how you put a image so we can see what it looks like but also with your description.Over all great slide thank you for teaching me about your culture.
I loved how you explained the legends Diwali and what were the names of the gods and devils. Also how you explained why they light candles. You guys did a Good job.
Great work, I liked the presentation on Diwali, I like how you put lots of detail into your paragraphs, next time don't copy and paste some of your writing, but you can research just put it in your own words, besides the copying and pasting I like your slide and could see you put a lot of hard work into your slide, thanks I learnt a lot from your slide.
Great work, I liked the presentation on Diwali, I like how you put lots of detail into your paragraphs, next time don't copy and paste some of your writing, but you can research just put it in your own words, besides the copying and pasting I like your slide and could see you put a lot of hard work into your slide, thanks I learnt a lot from your slide.
Wow,you guys all did a amazing job! I really liked your quotes and Diwali food looks tasty and very interesting,I would love to try it one day. Next time maybe put more information into one slide so there's not to much slides. Otherwise great job!
Kyra-R I think that you have to put more detail into your blog post. Apart fro that i like you post. Dhruvi, Sathmini, Aunsha Quinn. I think you should put more information on one slide so there is not to much slides. Otherwise you girls did a really great job on your slides.
That was great you guys! I liked how you put on some cool photos about Diwali, and when you said you put some candle things outside to scare away the evil hope you enjoyed Diwali too.
Well done! Dhruvi, Anusha, Sathmini and Quinn. You guys have put a lot of effort into all of your work and this Diwali Holiday! I really enjoyed it and I think others did too. So again Well Done! All you guys need to do is just add more words instead of all the pictures that have been put in I really do love them but it just seems like to much not trying to be offensive.
Great job Quinn,Dhruvi,Sathmini and Anusha you guys did a great job I think you guys were using religious alot. I think that you used pictures alot but it was really great thank you. From Emily
Great job Quinn,Dhruvi,Sathmini and Anusha you guys did a great job I think you guys were using religious alot. I think that you used pictures alot but it was really great thank you. From Emily
I Loved the fact that you did lots of information about the Dawali festival, but next time can you try not to copy and paste your information. And what is a Hindu???🤔
Thanks Team! It was really fun making this slide show with you! It took a while, but that's OK because it turned out really good!
ReplyDeleteI think you guys did an awesome job with all the facts and the pictures ,but I think you should to a vedio or something.
ReplyDeleteGreat work girls I learnt a lot from that slide show and I really like all legend stories in the slide show...Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteIt is really neat that you tell us about this great holiday. I wish you would tell us what the sikhs and jains worship about on devali.I like that ypou tell us about diffrent storys of devaoli
ReplyDeletenexts time you should make the sentence small because the slides go to fast. julian
ReplyDeleteGreat slide I think you could add more Detail as there were four of you to find information. I like how you put a image so we can see what it looks like but also with your description.Over all great slide thank you for teaching me about your culture.
ReplyDeleteI loved how you explained the legends Diwali and what were the names of the gods and devils. Also how you explained why they light candles.
ReplyDeleteYou guys did a Good job.
Great work, I liked the presentation on Diwali, I like how you put lots of detail into your paragraphs, next time don't copy and paste some of your writing, but you can research just put it in your own words, besides the copying and pasting I like your slide and could see you put a lot of hard work into your slide, thanks I learnt a lot from your slide.
ReplyDeleteGreat work, I liked the presentation on Diwali, I like how you put lots of detail into your paragraphs, next time don't copy and paste some of your writing, but you can research just put it in your own words, besides the copying and pasting I like your slide and could see you put a lot of hard work into your slide, thanks I learnt a lot from your slide.
ReplyDeleteI love that you put in praying but just wondering if on slide 3 you copy and pasted other than that it was great.
ReplyDeleteWow,you guys all did a amazing job! I really liked your quotes and Diwali food looks tasty and very interesting,I would love to try it one day. Next time maybe put more information into one slide so there's not to much slides. Otherwise great job!
ReplyDeletethis is really cool i like the way you put all the cool photos that you put on, but you shouldent put your faces on the internet.
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ReplyDeleteI think that you have to put more detail into your blog post. Apart fro that i like you post. Dhruvi, Sathmini, Aunsha Quinn. I think you should put more information on one slide so there is not to much slides. Otherwise you girls did a really great job on your slides.
That was great you guys! I liked how you put on some cool photos about Diwali, and when you said you put some candle things outside to scare away the evil hope you enjoyed Diwali too.
ReplyDeleteWell done! Dhruvi, Anusha, Sathmini and Quinn. You guys have put a lot of effort into all of your work and this Diwali Holiday! I really enjoyed it and I think others did too. So again Well Done! All you guys need to do is just add more words instead of all the pictures that have been put in I really do love them but it just seems like to much not trying to be offensive.
ReplyDeleteGreat job Quinn,Dhruvi,Sathmini and Anusha you guys did a great job I think you guys were using religious alot. I think that you used pictures alot but it was really great thank you. From Emily
ReplyDeleteGreat job Quinn,Dhruvi,Sathmini and Anusha you guys did a great job I think you guys were using religious alot. I think that you used pictures alot but it was really great thank you. From Emily
ReplyDeletewow i loved reading it was really interesting reading about the tattoos and stuff it looked really awesome thanks for the information.Troy.
ReplyDeleteI Loved the fact that you did lots of information about the Dawali festival, but next time can you try not to copy and paste your information. And what is a Hindu???🤔
ReplyDeletewow great work guys i love all the facts and the information about the Diwali festival. great work i love the pictures that you picked out. o_0 :)
ReplyDeleteWell done I like the henna pattern I have the Henna pen too its nice to use even when you haven tried
ReplyDeletewow i love this it excellent from diya.
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