With the relay photos I did see you copy and pact on slide five and six. I like our class photos for room 12s relay team. Other than the copy and pasting. It's great. I like the hook Saying Athletics really big. Maybe next time you should put... By Emily, Lilly and Kaliyah at the end. I like at the end when you said Thankyou! Well done.
Nice job Lilly,Emily and Kaliyah. I like how you talked about all the races like 200,100,60 metre races and kept track of the postions. Next time I think you should not say Thankyou all the time. I like the way you labled the names of the realys team so the parents could know the names.
Well Done girls you have done really good and the no.1 I liked is how you have told us who came which place and what race that they had ran and got a specific place. Good Work. There is also a spelling mistake I noticed.
I love this slide for telling us about basically every event.If you're going to tell us about the names of the winners in words the photos are going to have some meaning but not that much .
I like how you wrote your name on the cover so we know who its by and the photos you added. I also like how you did the places and a question at the end, but i think you could improve on more hooks and more descriptive adjectives.
Wow, awesome slide show about athletics day. I liked how you showed who came second and third,and how you put on the people in our class on your slide too.The thing that i spotted was that you forgot to put some punctuation in it but other than that you did a great job well done.
this is really cool i like all the detail and photos and i like the way you named all the people that did the relay but you could work on your spelling mistakes.
I thought this was a good slideshow. I liked how you showed our class relay teams and showed us of what relays actually are for people who don't know. But I think you should've added the classes these people are in, apart from that it was good
Well done girls you've got a really good slide, I like all the detail you have put in. Next time you might just have to check your spelling, it was very fascinating.
Good Job Emily, Lily & Kaliyah I agree With everybody else who has commented on your guys slides ☺ I like the way you did it on different slides Like Payton said x
With the relay photos I did see you copy and pact on slide five and six. I like our class photos for room 12s relay team. Other than the copy and pasting. It's great. I like the hook Saying Athletics really big. Maybe next time you should put...
ReplyDeleteBy Emily, Lilly and Kaliyah at the end. I like at the end when you said Thankyou!
Well done.
I like your slides and blog post. I like the way you labels .
ReplyDeleteWell done! I loved that, but next time look out for spelling mistakes, because Nishali's name was spelt wrong. But you did a good job!
ReplyDeleteNice job Lilly,Emily and Kaliyah. I like how you talked about all the races like 200,100,60 metre races and kept track of the postions. Next time I think you should not say Thankyou all the time. I like the way you labled the names of the realys team so the parents could know the names.
ReplyDeletei like how you labeled every one with there names the photos are very good. Nice work.
ReplyDeleteWell Done girls you have done really good and the no.1 I liked is how you have told us who came which place and what race that they had ran and got a specific place. Good Work. There is also a spelling mistake I noticed.
ReplyDeleteI love this slide for telling us about basically every event.If you're going to tell us about the names of the winners in words the photos are going to have some meaning but not that much .
ReplyDeleteI like how you wrote your name on the cover so we know who its by and the photos you added. I also like how you did the places and a question at the end, but i think you could improve on more hooks and more descriptive adjectives.
ReplyDeleteI like how you done sign's and names plus pictures.
ReplyDeleteWow, awesome slide show about athletics day. I liked how you showed who came second and third,and how you put on the people in our class on your slide too.The thing that i spotted was that you forgot to put some punctuation in it but other than that you did a great job well done.
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ReplyDeleteI like how you girls put the pictures on the first slide and the rest of the slides are really awesome.
this is really cool i like all the detail and photos and i like the way you named all the people that did the relay but you could work on your spelling mistakes.
ReplyDeleteI thought this was a good slideshow. I liked how you showed our class relay teams and showed us of what relays actually are for people who don't know. But I think you should've added the classes these people are in, apart from that it was good
ReplyDeleteIt was really cool that slide and I like how you made lines and label the person's name,and still it was really cool.
ReplyDeleteWell done girls you've got a really good slide, I like all the detail you have put in. Next time you might just have to check your spelling, it was very fascinating.
ReplyDeleteI like how you included pictures of the 1st 2nd 3rd people of the race and like how you tried to get a picture of the people during the race.
ReplyDeleteWow Great job girls,I really like all your individual slides.I also like all your pictures. Keep up the good work x
ReplyDeleteWell done,I like how you have done this slideshow. :D
ReplyDeleteWell done girls keep up the good work I like the way you set up the presentation nice and tidy
ReplyDeleteGood Job Emily, Lily & Kaliyah I agree With everybody else who has commented on your guys slides ☺ I like the way you did it on different slides Like Payton said x
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Good Job On Your Slide Show It Looks Really Good :D
ReplyDeleteThank you all for the comment
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